Paul giving a session

Rog (Lucy): Edit One Paragraph (1)

AUDIO: "All right. Edit one paragraph."

Response Options:

I edited one paragraph, and . . .

• I want to edit another existing paragraph

• I'm ready to add new details

Other

• I want to redo the whole thing from scratch

• Shutting down | Don't want to continue | Realization

Write on Report:

(The shading is just to make it clearer here.)

1. Wreyu rwgwru rewtu ew! T we u wui uwe
fg fgsg, gh sdgh sd gh. Fsbh fh ds hj h dsj hjd h
sbh bh. H dh hd he gh hd hg gsh he rjksd hg hg r ksd
fbsjh hfsd hj sh hj shj sh hjew.
Summary? Uiou uiou ui ui uiewew oiow eo yewyuywe.
Feel? Wqrtwq wqgyqty d gydstr tw tyad ty.

2. Kjfkjgk kjfk rk nm ndhjhfdhdj.
hhfdjhfd nbg bew bs k hshk fsk h hks.
Summary? Qqlwk mnjnfhfhry hfgeu iij.
Feel? Ploy juht geyr mmmdn nwq.

3. Mnkh kyigu gfkfk djsfh fdshj h
jhe. Sbs gwj fjshj rjwefdhj shjs jdjd fhsj hsjh hj s
hsh hdsj hjs h hjs dhjs j shjs.
Summary? Sxa bfgr jjiu fodk mnep.
Feel? Lki nbhg jjrk dueh ngqo plio lkaa.

__:__ (the time)
How doing? Hghre.

Edit
2. Kjfkjgk kjfk rk nm ndhjhfdhdj.
hhfdjhfd nbg bew bs k hshk fsk h hks.
kjie werwrej nfhd kew.
Summary? Qqlwk mnjnfhfhry hfgeu iij.
Feel? Ploy juht geyr mmmdn nwq. Klp, juh qqk!

Notes:

Edit one or more paragraphs

  1. Copy and paste the whole of one single numbered paragraph that you want to change, to the current place in your worksheet. Copy/paste all three sections of this one paragraph — the factual content, the summary, and the feeling.
  2. Edit whichever parts of that one single paragraph you wish. Don't do more than one paragraph in this step or it will get too messy! One step — one paragraph — at a time.

Redo the whole thing

If you want to rewrite the whole thing, i.e., all the paragraphs, maybe because your view of it has now changed, that is totally fine. Select the redo from scratch (the beginning) option.